4 responses to “the wheels on the bus”

  1. Sanga

    This is beautiful. The simplicity of the language emphasises the feeling of nostalgia. Love crabs.

  2. happyredrooster

    Here’s how it worked for me – honestly, on first reading it, the begining is completely alien to me. But the closing line – oh man, what a way to tie it all in, bring it all together and, suddenly, every word that precedes the last line becomes meaningful. (Wouldn’t it be grand to quench the thirst of a thousand with the last drop of water?) I sincerely love this piece.

    On another note, to be homeward bound – how I long for that.

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