4 responses to “the eyes”

  1. Gauri Gharpure

    I liked the older version better.. Though in both the cases, I could make sense only of the first stanza. But then sometimes our words are so personal, not quite for public to make sense of them, hai na..

  2. Renee Lulam

    Nice. I can see the 'Baruk, Sanga, Reuben school of neo-imagist poetry' in this, of course.

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